2022 Progressive Poem, Day 12
Today I am hosting the 2022 Progressive Poem. It's been at least ten years that the Progressive Poem has been a collaborative effort in the Poetry Kitlit World. It's fun to see how the poem reveals itself throughout the month. This year, the poem is almost a CENTO style as the contributors have been finding lines from favorite poems and books.
I went in search of lines in Chris Baron's The Magical Imperfect. I love that book. I found several lines (from two places in the book)that spoke to me:
The fog is lighter now,
and the moon is slicing
through the sky.
I whisper to it, tap on the trunk,
imagine it feeling my sound.
And I'm adapting to this:
The moon is slicing through the sky. We whisper to the tree, tap on the trunk,
imagine it feeling our sound.
2022 Progessive Poem
Where they were going, there were no maps.
Sorry! I don’t want any adventures, thank you. Not Today.
Take the adventure, heed the call, now ere the irrevocable moment passes!
We have to go back. I forgot something.
But it’s spring, and the world is puddle-wonderful, so we’ll whistle and dance and set off on our way.
Come with me, and you’ll be in a land of pure imagination.
Wherever you go, take your hopes, pack your dreams, and never forget – it is on our journeys that discoveries are made.
And then it was time for singing.
Can you sing with all the voices of the mountain, paint with all the colors of the wind, freewheeling through an endless diamond sky?
Suddenly, they stopped and realized they weren’t the only ones singing.
Listen, a chattering of monkeys! Let’s smell the dawn and taste the moonlight, we’ll watch it all spread out before us.
The moon is slicing through the sky. We whisper to the tree, tap on the trunk, imagine it feeling our sound.
Lines 1 -12, poet and where they are from:
Now I place it in the the hands of Karin Fisher-Golton at Still in Awe.
4/12/2022 05:34:55 am
Jone, thanks for the magical line that holds beautiful sensory details. The sounds are so gentle that they spark imagination. I am really enjoying this poem this year.
4/12/2022 06:28:39 am
I love that book, too, Jone. And love that you've added to this adventure with the moon!
4/12/2022 08:55:59 am
And now you've made me want to find this book! Lovely sounds and feelings.
4/12/2022 09:24:42 am
What a beautiful line/collage of lines! I'm enjoying pondering where to take the poem next.
4/12/2022 09:46:06 am
I have only read one of Chris Baron's books. I'd like to read this one. Your new line makes me wonder if the tree will respond.
Janet Clare F.
4/12/2022 02:08:36 pm
4/12/2022 03:21:16 pm
What a gorgeous image that is, Jone. I really want to be on this adventure with them.
4/12/2022 05:52:06 pm
Thanks for this beautiful image of the moon Jone, and then all the sensory feelings coming out too!
4/12/2022 09:58:10 pm
I adore a moon slicing through the sky and whispering to a tree...! This is so much fun! I love Chris Baron's verse novel ALL OF ME! I want to read THE MAGICAL IMPERFECT, also.
4/17/2022 06:19:21 pm
Ahhh, you've teased some more sparkly moonlight out of these verses. Lovely, Jone - And I'm imagining we're tapping a tree where the monkeys are? We'll see!
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2023 Progressive Poem
April 1 Mary Lee Hahn, Another Year of Reading
April 2 Heidi Mordhorst, My Juicy Little Universe
April 3 Tabatha, The Opposite of Indifference
April 4 Buffy Silverman
April 5 Rose Cappelli, Imagine the Possibilities
April 6 Donna Smith, Mainely Write
April 7 Margaret Simon, Reflections on the Teche
April 8 Leigh Anne, A Day in the Life
April 9 Linda Mitchell, A Word Edgewise
April 10 Denise Krebs, Dare to Care
April 11 Emma Roller, Penguins and Poems
April 12 Dave Roller, Leap Of Dave
April 13 Irene Latham Live You Poem
April 14 Janice Scully, Salt City Verse
April 15 Jone Rush MacCulloch
April 16 Linda Baie, TeacherDance
April 17 Carol Varsalona, Beyond Literacy Link
April 18 Marcie Atkins
April 19 Carol Labuzzetta at The Apples in My Orchard
April 20 Cathy Hutter, Poeturescapes
April 21 Sarah Grace Tuttle, Sarah Grace Tuttle’s Blog,
April 22 Marilyn Garcia
April 23 Catherine, Reading to the Core
April 24 Janet Fagal, hosted by Tabatha, The Opposite of Indifference
April 25 Ruth, There is no Such Thing as a God-Forsaken Town
April 26 Patricia J. Franz, Reverie
April 27 Theresa Gaughan, Theresa’s Teaching Tidbits
April 28 Karin Fisher-Golton, Still in Awe Blog
April 29 Karen Eastlund, Karen’s Got a Blog
April 30 Michelle Kogan Illustration, Painting, and Writing