Poetry Friday: A Poem From Georgia Heard's Class

Jan at Bookseedstudio Optional theme: Sing!

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 In August, I started this as a writing prompt from the Mud Puddle.  

This month, I took a class from Georgia Heard.  She has The Poet's Studio and it's a great way to be in community of poets.  We were to write a poem that uses the ears and revise it.  I went to this poem,  
My revisions, before class and after.  
BEFORE CLASS

The Window at Dawn
By Jone Rush MacCulloch

At dawn
Crocosmia shows its blooms-
an invitation
​Hummingbirds sip nectar
refuel mid-flight

At dawn
a cloud of bushtits hang
upside down- pecking suet
Juncos flit between feeders
breakfast on nuts and seeds

At dawn
grey squirrel flicks his tail
a party crasher
scampers across the railing
A fluster of feathers

AFTER CLASS
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At Dawn
By Jone Rush MacCulloch

Hummingbirds sip crocosmia
nectar, refuel mid-flight.

A cloud of bushtits hang
upside down- pecking suet.

Juncos flit between feeders
breakfast on nuts and seeds.

Grey squirrel flicks his tail,
a party crasher,
​
scampers across the railing
a fluster of feathers.

CROCOSMIA

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